成功 and 失败

I like this sentence very much.
I think it's true and we should be aware of it anytime, anywhere...

成功- 是许多小优点的累积，
失败- 是许多小疏忽的结果。

In English:
Success is the combination of lots of small strength,
Lost is the circumstances of lots of careless.

In Malay:
Kejayaan adalah kumpulan dari banyak kelebihan kecil,
Kegagalan adalah akibat daripada banyak kecuaian kecil.

Is this correct?
Because my English only Sendirian Berhad and my malay is actually quite good leh
hahaha...